решебник.рф ГДЗ по английскому языку 10 класс Афанасьева О.В., Дули Д., Михеева И. В. упражнение - 7 стр. 56
- a) Read Andrea’s letter of application for the position advertised in Ex. 6a on p. 55. Is it appropriate? Why (not)? Give reasons.
28 Leahurst Rd
York YK13 SNL
4th September
Dear Mr Willis,
I am writing to apply for the position of Part-Time Sales Assistant which I saw in the newspaper I bought while I was walking my dog, Pedro, yesterday.
I am 16 years old, I am tall and I have got long brown curly hair. I have got one sister, who I get on with very well.
Although I don’t have any experience of working in a shop, I want to work for you. I have had a regular baby-sitting job for a year now. I am trustworthy and reliable, but I can sometimes be a little impatient and moody.
I’m free to start work from July. I finish my exams at the end of May but I’m planning to go on holiday in June. I can’t wait to hear from you.
Yours sincerely,
Andrea Leary
- b) Read again and find the inappropriate parts. Re-write the letter so that it is more appropriate.
- Too informal and irrelevant details
Mentioning buying the newspaper while walking her dog and details about her sister are unnecessary and unprofessional.
- Focus on appearance
Saying she is tall and has long curly hair is irrelevant for the job position.
- Negative self-description
Mentioning that she can be impatient and moody is inappropriate in a job application.
- Unclear availability
Saying she can start in July but will be on holiday in June is confusing and could be better explained.
- Informal language and short forms
I’m, got, can’t wait
- b)
28 Leahurst Rd
York YK13 SNL
4th September
Dear Mr Willis,
I am writing to apply for the position of Part-Time Sales Assistant advertised in the newspaper. I am very interested in this job and believe I would be a good fit for your team.
Although I do not have previous experience working in a shop, I have developed strong communication and responsibility skills through my regular babysitting job over the past year. I am reliable, trustworthy, and eager to learn new skills.
I will be available to start work on July 1st. I am committed to balancing work with my studies and am confident I can contribute positively to your store.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my suitability for the role.
Yours sincerely,
Andrea Leary