ГДЗ по английскому языку 10 класс упражнение - 6 р. 38 b

Условие

b) Look at a student’s answer. Is it the correct length? Does it include the correct information? Is it written in an appropriate style?  

 

Thank you for buying a new pair of football boots for me. Size 8 fits me really well. I have got football practice later today, so I will not arrive home until half past six.  

By the way, you don’t need to worry because I haven’t forgotten that it’s Dad’s birthday. 

Yours,

Luke  

 

Решение #1
  • Is it the correct length?

The answer has about 40 words, which is slightly more than the required 25-35 words. So, the length is a bit too long.

 

  • Does it include the correct information?

Yes, the note thanks for the boots, confirms the size, mentions the time of return, and reminds about Dad’s birthday dinner – all necessary information is included.

 

  • Is the style appropriate?

The style is too formal for a note to mum. Phrases like «Thank you for buying a new pair of football boots for me» sound official, while family notes are usually more casual and warm. Also, «Yours, Luke» is too formal; «Love, Luke» or just «Luke» would be better.  

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