решебник.рф ГДЗ по английскому языку 11 Класс класс упражнение - 94 р. 6
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The warden of your local park wants to make the park more attractive and popular. Write a report making some suggestions on how the appearance of the park and its facilities can be improved.
To: Mike Stephens, Shipton Park Warden
Subject: Suggestions for improving Shipton Park
Introduction
I’d really like to tell you about the things I’ve thought of to make the park better for people.
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Appearance
The park is in need of more plants, flowers and trees. Therefore, suggest that more gardeners be employed by the council. My dad has planted lots of flowers in our garden and it looks lovely. Also, there is a lot of litter in the park.
So? What should be done about it?
Playground
I feel that you could improve the facilities in the park. There is no children’s playground, so you should build one. You could open a cafeteria and construct a small football pitch.
To sum up, I believe that these recommendations would improve the park immensely and encourage more people to use it.
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From: Alex Smith, Shipton Park Visitor
To: Mike Stephens, Shipton Park Warden
Subject: Suggestions for improving Shipton Park
Date: 15th May
Introduction
The purpose of this report is to suggest ways to improve the appearance and facilities of Shipton Park in order to make it more attractive and popular among local residents and visitors.
Appearance
The park is currently lacking sufficient greenery, including plants, flowers, and trees. Therefore, it is recommended that more gardeners be employed by the council to maintain and enhance the park’s natural beauty. In addition, the problem of littering has been observed throughout the park. Regular cleaning and the installation of additional rubbish bins should be implemented to address this issue and keep the park tidy.
Facilities
At present, there is no children’s playground in the park, which limits its appeal to families. It is suggested that a modern playground be constructed to provide a safe and enjoyable area for children. Furthermore, the construction of a small football pitch would encourage physical activity among teenagers and adults. To complement these facilities, the opening of a cafeteria could provide refreshments and create a social space for visitors.
Conclusion
In conclusion, the employment of additional gardeners, improved waste management, the addition of a children’s playground and football pitch, and the establishment of a cafeteria would significantly enhance Shipton Park. These improvements would encourage greater use of the park and contribute to the well-being of the community.